11 The Vigil of the Red-Haired Witch
The drive back was a nightmare of adrenaline and tears. Alistair was slumped against the passenger door. His skin was unnaturally cold, and his eyes were rolled back to reveal a terrifying sliver of gold. Rowan steered with one hand while holding her phone tightly in the other.
“Hamish, please meet me at the Hearth,” she sobbed into the Bluetooth car system. Dr. Hamish Campbell was her oldest friend in the glen.
When she arrived, the two of them struggled to haul Alistair’s massive, lifeless frame into the cottage. They settled him into Rowan’s bed and draped a heavy tartan plaid over him. Hamish checked his pulse, pupils, and oxygen level.
“Rowan, his vitals are stable, but strange,” Hamish muttered, frowning at his stethoscope. “His heartbeat is slow, like a creature in deep hibernation. There’s no head trauma or sign of a stroke. Who is this man? Truly?”
Rowan looked at Alistair on the bed—the man who had lived in her rafters for centuries. She confided in Hamish. And so she told him about the eagle, the lightning, the kilt, and how he spoke of 1746 as if it were yesterday. Hamish, a proud Scot who knew that not everything in the mist-shrouded glens could be explained by medicine, didn’t doubt her. He simply squeezed her hand.
“Keep him warm, Rowan. If he’s thawing from three centuries, maybe his spirit is just traveling. Call me the second he stirs.”
Hamish packed away his stethoscope, but didn’t move toward the door. He looked at Rowan, then at the man lying like a fallen monument on the bed. His expression was uncharacteristically somber.
“Rowan,” Hamish said softly. “Did anyone ever tell you the tale of ‘The Vigil of the Red-Haired Witch’?”
Rowan shook her head, her brow furrowed. “No, you know I grew up in London. My stories weren’t about witches.”
Hamish leaned against the bedpost. “It’s an old whisper from this specific glen. They say that, back in the days of the clan wars, there was a woman with hair like yours—fire and copper. Her husband was a shapeshifter who could take the form of a great bird to protect the high passes.”
He paused and glanced at Alistair’s gold-flecked eyes. “The story goes that when he was wounded in battle, his spirit became trapped between the sky and the earth. He couldn’t return to his body, nor could he pass on. The woman sat by his side for seven nights, not eating or sleeping. She wove a tether of words, telling him every secret of her heart and every reason he needed to stay. She believed her voice was the only thing keeping his soul from being swept away by the Red Wind of the dead.”
Hamish sighed, looking weary. “The legend says she succeeded, but at a price. He returned, but he was always part shadow, and she was branded a witch for ‘stealing’ a soul back from the gates of heaven. Looking at him—and looking at you—I wonder if the old blood is repeating itself. Maybe he has been cursed by the vigil, Rowan. Maybe he’s waiting for your voice to pull him through the gap in time.”
He squeezed her shoulder. “He’s not medically dead, but he’s not here. Get some rest, Rowan. If he’s going to wake up, it’ll be because of you.” He quietly let himself out, leaving the cottage to the silence of the glen.
After Hamish left, Rowan placed candles around the bed. Their soft light flickered, mimicking the hearth Alistair had known. Maybe it would help him find his way back. She sat in the wing chair and tangled her fingers in his cold hand.
“You have to come back, Alistair,” she whispered. “Vane is coming tomorrow to tear it all down. I have the papers, but I don’t have you. I need you. I can fight the law, but I can’t fight the silence without you. Please don’t leave me alone.”
She leaned her head against the mattress. “Do you want to know why I came here? Why I bought a ruin in a glen that no one remembers?”
She began to tell him her story—the one she had never told anyone.
“I’ve always felt out of place, Alistair,” she whispered into the crook of his neck. “I used to have this dream. I was standing in a field of red heather, and there was a shadow above me. I wasn’t afraid. I felt protected. Every time I experienced heartbreak or lost a loved one, I would hear a faint shriek in my sleep. I thought it was just my imagination. The longer I stayed in London, the more I felt like a ghost. Over the years that feeling grew stronger. I knew I had to move on. When I first saw the ‘Eagle’s Hearth’ in the real estate listings, I didn’t see just a house. I saw the shadow from my dreams. I’ve been searching for you my whole life, Alistair. I didn’t know I was looking for a man who died at Culloden or for an eagle in the rafters. I was just looking for the other half of my soul. I think I have already lived here. For three hundred years, my soul has been sitting on this very doorstep, waiting for the eagle to come down from the rafters.”
Rowan looked at his still face. There was nothing. No sign of life. No motion. She wrapped her arms around his broad chest, trying to use her body heat to anchor him back to the 21st century. “Come back to me. Not for the land. Come back for us.”
As she drifted into a light, exhausted sleep against his chest, the candles started to flicker violently. Outside, the wind began to howl. For the first time since he collapsed, Alistair’s chest hitched with a deep, shuddering breath.
The first crack of thunder shook not only the glass but also rattled Rowan’s teeth. The storm outside wasn’t just weather; it was the collision of two centuries.
Rowan shivered as the air in the bedroom turned unnaturally icy and smelled of ancient snow and ionized copper. “Just Scotland,” she whispered, her teeth chattering as she struggled with the window latch. “Just a drafty old house. No red-haired witches here.”
But as she forced the frame shut, a bolt of white fire arced from the heavens and struck the remains of the rowan tree. It ignited instantly, reminding her of a Viking funeral pyre.
In the blinding flash, Alistair’s chest heaved. He bolted upright with a ragged, predatory gasp.
His eyes weren’t the whisky-gold she knew and loved. No, they were a flaming solar fire—incandescent and terrifying.
At the exact moment Alistair came back to life, the heavy oak door downstairs burst open with a booming thud that echoed through the stone foundation.
“Alistair!” Rowan screamed, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird.
He sprang to his feet in a blur, his massive frame radiating heat that fought back the supernatural chill. His gaze swept the room and landed on her. “Rowan,” he rasped, his gravelly baritone voice vibrating in the air. “I am back. Why are ye so frightened, lass?”
“The wind… The window won’t stay shut,” she stammered, pointing at the casement that was swinging wide again. “And the door! Someone just kicked in the door!”
Alistair didn’t hesitate. With lethal, fluid grace, he reached for the leather belt draped over the bedpost. His hand closed around the hilt of the highland broadsword he had brought back from the Shadow Moor of 1746. The steel sang as it left the scabbard, catching the orange glow of the burning tree outside.
“Stay behind me,” he commanded, narrowing his eyes as he turned toward the stairs. “I’ve faced the Redcoats on the moor and the Red Wind of the dead. I won’t let a common thief or a greedy developer cross this threshold.”
Alistair descended the stairs, his bare feet silent on the cold stone. The front door was wide open, revealing the rain-streaked night and the burning rowan tree.
The icy air swirled into the kitchen and formed a faint, misty shape that resembled the tattered hem of a kilt.
“Reveal yerself,” Alistair growled at the shadow doorway. His voice echoed with the authority of the Fireun. “This hearth is claimed. By blood, by paper, and by the Lady upstairs.”
Another lightning bolt struck the sky. In the sudden light, a man appeared in the doorway, soaked to the bone. Rain from the glen dripped off his heavy woolen coat, which looked like it had been pulled from a museum—or a grave. The man was gasping for air. His face was contorted into a mask full of unbridled fury and desperation.
Alistair froze. The sword tip wavered just inches from the man’s chest.
“Murdòch?” Alistair’s voice was little more than a whisper.
Murdòch MacCulloch—his second-in-command—was the last person he had seen disappear into the sulfurous smoke of the well of the dead at Culloden. Murdòch, who had held the line while Alistair took to the sky.
“Alistair?” Murdòch rasped. His eyes were wide and bloodshot. They darted around the modern kitchen—the electric kettle, the refrigerator, the bright LED lights—with a terror bordering on madness. “Where is the moor? Where are the Redcoats? I was… I was falling. The bayonet was at my breast. Then, the sky turned white.”
Murdòch took a staggering step forward, his muddy boots treading on Rowan’s clean floor. He looked at Alistair, then at the sword, and finally at his own hands. “Am I dead, Alistair? Is this the Tìr nan Òg?”
Rowan appeared at the top of the stairs, her face pale in the flickering candlelight. She looked at the two giants standing in her kitchen—one a man she had come to love and the other a terrifying echo of the history books.
“Alistair?” she called out, her voice trembling. “Who is he?”
Alistair didn’t lower his weapon. He stared at Murdòch’s shoulder, where a fresh, jagged tear in his kilt revealed a crimson, hot, and undeniably real wound that was still bleeding. The lightning had done more than bring Alistair back to his body; it had created a supernatural bridge, dragging the final desperate moments of 1746 into the sanctuary of the 21st century.
“He is my brother-in-arms,” Alistair said, his eyes finally softening with a mixture of joy and absolute dread. “If he is here, Rowan, then the gate isn’t just open. It’s shattered.”
Murdòch collapsed onto the kitchen chair where Dr. Hamish Campbell had sat hours before. He looked at Rowan, his jaw dropping at the sight of her modern clothes and flaming hair. “The Red-Haired Witch,” he whispered, crossing himself with trembling hands. “The legend was true. You’ve pulled us through the veil.”
12 The Bloodline in the Brew
Alistair stepped forward, his eyes still bearing the sharp color intensity of the eagle he had been moments earlier. He explained to Murdòch that he hadn’t just been haunting the building—he was bound to it by an ancient blood oath sworn in the past. He hadn’t become a bird for no reason, transforming into an eagle had allowed him to protect the lad. However, he had never been able to shift back to his human form.
“The land doesn’t belong to the city or the bank,” Alistair said in a low rumble once he had filled his friend in. He pulled a heavy, waxed leather satchel from behind a loose floorboard near the hearth. Inside were the Sasine Register papers, the original deeds of heritable property. Since the land was never sold for monetary consideration, it remained under the ancient Scottish laws of primogeniture and was untouched by modern zoning laws.
Alistair turned to Rowan, questioning her earlier comment about her life being erased.
Her voice trembled as she explained her adoption. “I have no birth certificate that matches a face, no family tree that goes back further than a social worker’s file. In the eyes of history, my bloodline starts with a blank page.”
Murdòch, who had been silent, suddenly stepped closer to Rowan. He looked at the curve of her jaw and the unique color of her eyes. “Alistair,” he whispered. “She does have the look of Isobel.”
Her name, meaning ‘God’s promise’, hung heavy in the air.
Alistair nodded slowly. “I felt it the moment she walked in. The house’s spirit didn’t fight, but welcomed her.”
If Rowan was a direct descendant of Isobel, then she wasn’t just a tenant; she was the rightful heir to the land that Alistair had spent centuries guarding. But with Vale coming tomorrow morning to tear it all down, they needed to do more than find the connection, they needed to prove it before the bulldozers arrived.
Alistair led Rowan to the center of the shop where the original stone hearth of the cottage formed the base of the modern counter.
“The wood and stone of this place have ears, Rowan,” he murmured. “They have held every secret whispered within these walls for three centuries.”
Alistair knelt by the cold fireplace and struck a match. “In the Highlands, we call this the saining of the house,” he explained, referring to the Scottish tradition of blessing and protecting a home. “But for ye, it is a key.”
He placed his hands over Rowan’s on the cool granite countertop. “Close yer eyes. Don’t look for the coffee shop. Look for the echoes.”
As Rowan breathed in, the smell of roasted Arabica faded and was replaced by the sharp, metallic tang of an approaching storm and the scent of scorched peat. The shop walls seemed to bleed away into a rough-hewn croft.
Rowan saw a woman—Isobel—standing where she was standing. Isobel clutched a small silver brooch to her chest. Her face was a mirror image of Rowan’s own. She was weeping, not out of fear but out of desperate hope. She was hiding something beneath the floorboards—the very papers that Rowan had recovered.
Rowan felt Isobel’s thumb brush against a hidden notch in the wood. In the present, Rowan’s hand moved instinctively to that same spot under the counter. Her fingers found a small, carved thistle and rose—a symbol of a secret union.
“She didn’t just leave this place when she died,” Alistair whispered into Rowan’s ear as the vision flickered. “She left a piece of her anima—her soul—to guide the one who would return. Only someone of her blood can wake the Hearth’s true defense.”
Murdòch watched her intensely. “The ‘erased’ life ye spoke of? It wasn’t erased, lass. It was hidden for yer protection. Ye’re the ‘keystone’ of this property.”
Rowan pulled her hand back, her fingertips glowing with a faint Highland mist. Now she knew why she felt so drawn to this place. She wasn’t just the barista; she was the chieftain’s heir.
Alistair stepped into her personal space, his gaze intense. “The mark, Rowan. If the blood is true, the stone is not the only thing that remembers.”
With trembling hands, Rowan pulled her hair aside. There, at the nape of her neck, was a small, dark mole shaped like a crescent moon—the same mark Alistair had kissed a thousand times on Isobel’s skin.
“We need a Seer,” Alistair growled as he paced the length of the espresso bar. “A Bean-Fheasa—a woman of knowledge. Only a witch can weave the threads of the auld ways to open the portal.”
Murdòch leaned against a stack of coffee bean sacks, his brow furrowed. “Alistair, look around. It’s two bells past midnight in a city of neon and iron. Where do we find a weaver of spells now?” He paused, his eyes darting to Rowan. “Unless the spell is already here. If Rowan is the vessel and blood is the key, then she doesn’t need a witch to guide her. She needs a conduit.”
“We need a time slip ritual,” Murdòch suggested. “It will transport Rowan’s consciousness back into Isobel’s body in the winter of 1746.”
“If she goes back,” Alistair countered, his voice cracking with a rare flash of fear, “she will enter a world of fire and blood. 1746 was the year of the aftermath of the Battle of Culloden. If she is trapped there, she will be erased from this century entirely. I will not lose her to the redcoats again.”
Rowan stood tall, her reflection in the darkened window showing the faint shimmer of a woman she didn’t yet know. “I’ve spent my whole life feeling like a ghost in my own skin,” she said firmly. “Vale will come at dawn with the demolition crew. If finding the truth in the past is the only way to prove this land is mine, then send me back. I’d rather risk 1746 than live another day not knowing who I am.”
Alistair looked at her, the fire of the Highlands burning in her eyes. He realized then that she wasn’t just a descendant—she was the same soul who had once promised to wait for him.
He stood frozen, his golden irises expanding as the truth settled into his bones. “If the mark is the same and the soul recognizes the hearth, then Rowan is Isobel and Isobel is Rowan,” he whispered, his voice filled with grief. “But how can a woman be her own ancestor? How can ye be the root and the flower at once?”
Murdòch stepped forward, his expression grave. “In the Highlands, time is not a line, Alistair. It’s a Celtic knot,” he explained, tracing a circle in the air. “Isobel didn’t just die in the past. She must have used the last of her family’s old magic to fold herself into the future. She planted herself like a seed in another time to ensure the bloodline survived. Rowan, ye aren’t just a descendant. Ye’re Isobel’s soul reborn in a body that can finally return and finish what was started.”
“But I have seen Isobel’s grave,” Alistair muttered. “This cannot be.”
“Ye have seen a grave, brother. Not a bone, have ye?” Murdòch gripped Alistair’s shoulders, his tone turning urgent. “But listen well. When she steps through, she creates a bridge—a thin place. If she doesn’t close the gate on the 1746 side, the bridge will stay open. It won’t just be our brothers seeking refuge. She’ll be inviting the shadows of the past—vengeful redcoats, dark spirits, and those who hunted your kind—to pour into this modern world. It would be a disaster that her time cannot survive.”
“Me closing a gate? I don’t know how to close a portal between centuries,” Rowan confessed, her heart pounding in her chest.
“Isobel knows,” Murdòch promised. “Ye don’t need to learn. Ye only need to remember. Trust the instincts that lived in ye before ye were born into this life. The way is given, and the rights are claimed.”
Alistar turned to face Murdòch, his desperation clear. “Can I follow? If I shift, can I tether my spirit to hers? I will be her eyes in the sky, the guardian she didn’t have when the fires started.”
Murdòch nodded slowly. “As the eagle, ye can cross the veil as her companion. Ye will be the silver thread that keeps her anchored to the present. If she loses her way in the smoke of 1746, yer cry will be the only thing that can lead her back.”
“What if I cannot return? Am I bound to the past, or am I trapped in an eagle’s feather?”
“I do not know,” Murdòch muttered. “Maybe we don’t have enough time. This is haste. A rash decision. I fear we need more planning. I fear for both of ye, even if it is the only way. I have never been a shifter. Not to my knowledge. I shouldn’t even be here.”
“What are yer thoughts? Share yer mind, my friend.”
“I have no other conclusion. Isobel had performed a primal shift, not into an animal, but into a temporal vessel. She sent her essence forward, skipping through the generations until the land called her back home. Rowan’s feeling that her life had been erased was actually her soul waiting for the moment it would reconnect with the soil of 1745.”
Rowan looked at the espresso machine, then at the ancient stone hearth. “Then let’s go. Before Vale and his machines arrive to destroy the anchor.”
13 The Breach in the Quiet
The decision had been made. Rowan felt a cold, sharp clarity unlike anything she had ever known before—a determined resolve that replaced her fear. She knew she held the key to unlocking a power that had lain dormant for centuries. By stepping back, she wouldn’t just save the coffee shop. She would also free Alistair from his vigil and allow Murdòch to return to the life he was meant to lead.
Before the ritual began, Rowan took a heavy black marker from the barista station. She knelt and wrote a message directly onto the original oak floorboards behind the counter where the wood met the stone hearth.
“If I return in a different skin, look for the crescent moon. The hearth never went cold.”
She wrote it as herself, yet as she gripped the pen, her handwriting shifted into an elegant, archaic script she had never practiced. She realized now why she hadn’t remembered before; her soul had been hushed by the noise of the modern world. Only in the presence of the two Highlanders and in the face of loss could her ancient self awaken.
“It is time,” Alistair whispered. His body began to shimmer as his shoulders broadened, preparing to take the form of the eagle.
But the air suddenly curdled. The heavy silence that followed the storm was shattered by a sound that didn’t belong in a modern suburb, the rhythmic, terrifying clink-clink-clink of muskets and bayonets.
They froze. Through the steam-fogged front windows of the coffee shop, the streetlights flickered and died. The asphalt of the parking lot seemed to dissolve into a muddy, blood-soaked moor.
Out of the mist stepped shadows that shouldn’t exist: Not just redcoats with eyes like hollow coals but also hollowed creatures, spirits of the Highland clearances twisted by the open bridge. The veil wasn’t just thinning—it had torn wide open.
“The gate,” Murdòch growled as he drew a broadsword that glinted with an unnatural blue light. “The bridge is failing already. They aren’t waiting for us to cross, they’re coming to take the anchor!”
Outside, a spectral officer in a tattered 1746 uniform raised a sword and pointed it directly at Rowan.
Despite the humid night, frost began to form on the outside of the window. Through the ice ferns, Rowan saw proof that the modern streetlights weren’t just flickering—they were being swallowed by will-o’-the-wisps. Where the neighboring bookstore should have been, there was only a burning croft, its orange flames licking a sky that had turned the shadow-casting color of years long gone.
“They smell the blood of the weaver,” Murdòch barked, his voice dropping into a battle-hardened grit. He kicked a heavy bistro table over to barricade the door. “Alistair, look at the sky! Don’t let them circle the roof!”
With a sound like a whip cracking, Alistair’s human form dissolved into an impossibly large golden eagle, a blur of feathers and talons. It smashed through the upper transom window and dive-bombed the spectral redcoats gathering in the parking lot. His screech was a war cry that echoed in Rowan’s marrow.
The spectral officer outside slammed his hilt against the glass. The barrier shattered, but the shards didn’t hit the floor. They hovered in midair, suspended by a sudden, violent heat radiating from Rowan.
“Rowan, look at your hands!” Murdòch shouted.
Steam from the espresso machine swirled toward her, transforming from white vapor into a glowing amber mist. She realized then that the coffee shop was just a shell, the true energy was the earth beneath it. She reached out and, instead of fear, felt a surge of ancient Celtic protective magic.
She didn’t just see the redcoats; she saw the threads of time connecting them to the gate.
“I can see the anchors,” Rowan whispered, her voice layered with Isobel’s resonance. “Murdòch, they aren’t here to kill us. They’re trying to pull the stone hearth back into the past so the bridge can never be closed!”
Alistair screamed from above, a warning. A second wave of shadows emerged from the mist. They were faster and more feral than the soldiers.
“Go now!” Murdòch yelled, parrying a spectral bayonet thrust through the broken door. “I will hold the threshold. Find the center of the fire and quench it! If you don’t, there won’t be a present to come back to!”
Rowan didn’t run to the door. She ran to the hearth. As the eagle Alistair plummeted from the sky, catching her in his talons, the world turned inside out. The smell of roasted beans was overpowered by the smell of black powder and wet wool.
14 The Collision of Two Worlds
Was that her, though, or a different version? Was it Isobel, herself, just 280 years ago? Rowan gasped, her lungs burning from the thick, acrid smoke of burning thatch and peat. The transition into the past was so violent that her modern mind screamed for a sensory anchor. Her hand reached for a counter that wasn’t there and found only the rough, cold stone of the cottage’s exterior wall.
“Isobel! To the treeline, lass! Move!”
A man’s voice, raw and desperate, cut through the crackle of the flames. Rowan turned and froze. Running through the drifting smoke was Alistair, but not the Alistair she knew. This was her man in his prime—flesh and blood in his real lifetime—clad in a mud-caked great kilt. His face was streaked with soot and the frantic terror of a man losing everything.
Rowan’s modern instincts took over first. “Alistair! Watch out! Your flank!” she started to yell.
She almost said ‘your six’, a term she’d heard in a hundred movies. But the ancient spirit of Isobel surged up like a tide, snapping her jaw shut. Her body reacted before her brain could process it. Instead of cowering like a barista, she dropped into a low crouch, her fingers digging into the frozen earth.
“The papers!” Rowan cried out. Her voice was a strange, melodic blend of her modern accent and Isobel’s rolling Gaelic lilt. “Alistair, the hearth stones! They’re coming for the deed!”
Alistair skidded to a halt in front of her and grabbed her shoulders. He smelled of sweat, steel, and a wild, earthy musk. He looked at her with piercing intensity, but his brow furrowed in confusion.
“What in the Mother’s name are you wearing on your feet?” he demanded, glancing down at her modern leather Chelsea boots. They looked like alien technology against the mud. “And your hair…it’s been tied like a prisoner’s!”
Rowan looked down at her jeans and boots, then back at Alistair’s mud-streaked face. Her clothes hadn’t transformed; of course he wouldn’t recognize her from their shared future. The clash hit her like a physical blow. Modern Rowan wanted to explain the time slip and the coffee shop that was at risk.
But if ancient Isobel would mention ‘electricity’ or ‘Café’, he would think she had been cursed by the Sìthichean.
“There is no time!” Rowan shouted over the distant sound of Redcoat drums. “Alistair, you have to become the Eagle! You have to see where they are coming from!”
Alistair stepped back, his eyes wide. “How do ye know of the shifting, Isobel? I have never shown ye. I swore I would keep that darkness from ye.”
In that moment, he heard the bone-shattering shriek of an eagle. In this timeline, Alistair hadn’t revealed his secret yet. How could there be two of him?
Had Rowan altered the past of their relationship by knowing he was a shapeshifter?
There was no time to ponder or to explain. Suddenly, a musket ball whistled past her ear and shattered a clay pot near the door. The enemy was at the bottom of the hill. What battle was this? Had they mistaken in time? What fight had followed them to their doorstep?
“I know because I have seen the end of this story!” Rowan screamed, grabbing his face with both hands. “Listen to me! I am the one you waited for. You are going to wait for. You might not know it now, but we must save the future. We must ensure your and Isobel’s well-being. I am the heart’s flame right now. If you don’t follow my word, we won’t just die—we’ll be erased!”
The future version of Alistair landed next to Rowan and shifted back into human form. In the middle of the muddy Highland track stood Alistair, somehow older yet the same age, bearing the weary grace of three centuries. His 1746 incarnation met his 2026 self for the first time. The eagle shimmered in both of their eyes.
1746 Alistair stumbled back, his hand flying to the hilt of his dirk. He looked at his future self, who was wearing the same clothes but bearing a small, white scar across his brow that the present Alistair didn’t have yet. Beside him, Isobel gasped, her eyes darting between the Rowan she was destined to become and the Alistair she hadn’t lost yet.
“Alistair…” Isobel whispered, her fingers grazing his cheek. “How can this be? Two of you? Two of us?”
“There’s no time for the ‘how’,” Rowan interrupted urgently. She could feel a tugging sensation in her navel, a psychic tether pulling her toward the neon lights and the smell of espresso. “The bridge you built—the one you used to save your soul, is failing. It’s leaking. Murdòch is holding the line on the other side, but the Redcoats, and not only them, are pouring through. If we don’t fix this, the chaos will devour 2026.”
“Murdòch? 2026?” Isobel repeated, the number sounding like a foreign incantation. Her face paled. “Nearly three hundred years… My spell… I haven’t even cast it yet. I’m still trying to refine it.”
“You will,” Rowan said, stepping closer. “And yes, something must have gone wrong. The Highland Clearances are coming, and the clan lands are at stake. But you have to change the ending. When you cast it, find the gap, the flaw in the bridge that keeps it open. We have to go back. I can hear Murdòch’s voice in the wind. He’s losing his grip on the portal.”
Rowan held out her hand. “Isobel, give me the deed. The Sasine Register papers. I have the originals, but as you can imagine, they’ve deteriorated over the years. If I have the originals signed and sealed in 2026, Vale won’t be able to touch the building. It’s the only way to prove the land belongs to Alistair’s line.”
Isobel nodded, though she didn’t understand a word her future self was saying, she handed the heavy, yellowed parchment wrapped in oilcloth to Rowan. As her fingers touched Rowan’s, a spark of blue static jumped between them. For a split second, their memories merged. Rowan felt the cold of the harsh life in 1746, and Isobel felt the warmth of an unknown drink, a café latte, in her palms.
“Save it,” Isobel commanded, her voice suddenly iron-strong. “Save the hearth. If the house stands, we will never truly be gone.”
The sky above them began to swirl like a maelstrom.
2026 Alistair grabbed Rowan by the waist. “The tether is snapping! We have to jump now!”
As they began to dissolve into golden mist, Rowan looked back one last time. She saw the 1746 versions of themselves silhouetted against the burning cottage—a tragic yet beautiful image of a past finally beginning to understand its future.
Rowan and Alistair slammed back onto the floor of the coffee shop. The glass was shattered. The shop floor was a battlefield of shadows and steam with Murdòch pinned against the espresso machine by three spectral Redcoats, whose bayonets glowed with a sickly green rot.
Alistair drew his sword from its scabbard, flashing silver against the warm setting of lights in the café. With a roar echoing from the past, he cleaved through the spectral mist binding Murdòch. The two Highlanders stood back-to-back, forming a solid wall against the intruders.
Outside, the screech of tires announced Vale’s arrival. He stepped out of his sleek sedan and adjusted his suit jacket, but then froze. Through the shattered glass, he saw men in kilts swinging broadswords at what seemed to be some kind of ancient soldiers from another century.
“What the hell is this?” Vale stammered, his voice cracking. “Is this some twisted cosplay game? Do you even have a license for this?”
“Get in the car, Vale! Run!” Rowan screamed, ducking as a spectral musket ball shattered a display of muffins behind her.
The soldiers, unaware that they had slipped through time, shifted their gaze toward the developer. As they rushed toward him, Vale’s bravado vanished. He tripped over his expensive shoes and began to sob as he crawled backward toward his car. “This will have consequences!” he shrieked, slamming his door and flooring the accelerator. He left a trail of burnt rubber behind.
After the last soldier was driven back into the flickering gray void in the ground, a heavy silence fell. Alistair leaned on his sword, his chest heaving. The bridge wasn’t closed, it was an open wound in the middle of the glen. The peace would only last so long.
“We have to go back and seal it from the other side,” Rowan whispered, clutching the original deed.
Alistair turned to her, his eyes dark with sudden, sharp fear. “No, Rowan. If ye step through that mist again, the 18th century might claim ye. Ye belong to this world of lights and coffee. If the bridge breaks while ye’re on the other side, ye’ll be a ghost in a time that will burn ye.”
Rowan reached out, her fingers trembling as they touched his bleeding face. “I fear the same for you, too. This isn’t your time. You’re a spirit, though you are flesh and bone, bound to a house that shouldn’t exist anymore. If you go back, the timeline might correct itself by erasing you entirely.”
15 The Weight of Time
Isobel sat by the hearth, the firelight dancing in her eyes. In her lap lay the parchment wrapped in oilcloth, the deed that Rowan, her future shadow, had returned to her via the great eagle. The document was needed to cast the spell; the deed and the hearth were the binding objects.
Alistair stopped sharpening his blade. The rhythmic shing-shing of the stone against his claymore died away, leaving a silence so heavy that it felt like a physical weight. He looked at his wife and saw the way her fingers trembled against the wood of her chair.
“We could leave, Isobel,” he said in a low rasp. “Ye heard Alistair. The battle will be lost. I will be bound. This is a lost cause, and the Battle of Culloden is near. The Prince’s cause is a sinking ship, and I won’t let ye go down with it. We’re taking the horses. We’ll ride for the coast. There are ships in the harbor bound for the colonies—North Carolina or Virginia. We’ll leave this house, this curse, and the 300 years of solitude I saw in that man’s eyes.”
Isobel looked up, her gaze piercing. “And what about Rowan? She has my face, Alistair. She has my heart. But she walks through a world of glass and light, searching for a home she cannot name, because she is a shadow of me, a version of myself born from a spell I haven’t cast yet.”
She stood and paced the small dirt floor. “If we go to America and save our lives, Rowan will never be born. That coffee shop will be nothing but dust and a developer’s parking lot. The bridge will collapse, and the Alistair I know, the one who has guarded our hearth for three centuries, will vanish into the void. To save ourselves now is to murder our future.”
Alistair stood and crossed the room, taking her hands in his. His palms were calloused, the hands of a warrior and a farmer. “But the cost, Isobel! To stay is to invite the Highland Clearances. To stay means I’ll become a spirit bound to stone, and ye’ll… what? Die alone so that a lass three centuries from now can feel a ‘warm weight’ in a coffee shop? What even is this?”
“I’m not just dying, Alistair,” she whispered, leaning her forehead against his. “I am weaving. If I cast the spell as I intended and mend the gap, the flaw Rowan warned us about, I can alter your binding’s nature. I can ensure that the portal isn’t a leak but a door. A door that stays shut until the right hand turns the key.”
She pulled back, her eyes bright with sudden, desperate hope. “Rowan said she felt like she didn’t know who she was. That is because the spell I cast was born of fear and a bowstring drawn too tight. If I cast it now as a deliberate act of Covenanted Magic and not as a desperate plea to save your life at the moment of yer death, I can set things right.”
“How?” Alistair asked, his grip tightening.
“The gap,” she said, pointing to the foundation stone of the hearth. “I can seal the shifters and travelers away from the present. I can make it so the Redcoats can never follow. But it means we have to stay. Ye go to the moor, and I’ll stay here to anchor the spell when the torches come.”
Alistair let out a broken sound, half laugh and half sob. “Ye’re asking me to walk into a slaughter so that a version of us can be happy in a time when people drink bean water and stare at glowing rectangles?”
“I’m asking ye to save the soul of the Highlands,” Isobel countered fiercely. “If we go to America, we’ll just be two more refugees. If we stay, we become the Guardians of the Hearth. We preserve the line. We ensure that, when the world becomes cold, fast, and forgotten, there is one place, one little shop, where the ancient magic still breathes.”
She looked out the window at the moon rising over the jagged peaks. “Perhaps we have enough time to escape the immediate fire. I can cast a protective spell on the land, and then we can flee, but the spell requires a sacrifice. One of us must be tied to the stone.”
Alistair looked at his sword, then at the deed. He thought of Rowan’s smile and how she had looked at his future self—with a love that had survived three hundred years of winter.
“Then we won’t run,” Alistair said, his voice regaining its steel. “We bridge the gap. We’ll set the barrier so that it only opens for those who carry the blood and the memory. If I am to be a ghost, Isobel, then let me be a purposeful one.”
“I will rewrite the incantation. I will use the logic of the Sasine Register that Rowan spoke of. I will bind the land to yer spirit but leave a key in the bloodline. Life will return to its intended order, not a tragedy, but a cycle. But Alistair, hear me out. I have another idea.”
“Speak, mo chridhe.” He gently approached her.
“Speak from yer heart and yer mind.”
“There is another way for Rowan to be given life. I am not sure when she would be born. It might not be 2026, but she could live. She would have a real life, not just be a shadow of me. I can bind part of myself to this house without affecting our lives. I will carve a sign into the hearth, and when the time is right, the right person will find it. She will know it. She will feel it.”
Isobel stood before the hearthstone with her hands outstretched. She wasn’t just casting a spell; she was rewriting a destiny. As she spoke the ancient words, she visualized the gap that Rowan had described, the leak in time, and sealed it with an iron and rowan wood lock in her mind.
Alistair felt the shift in his marrow. The curse of 300 years of solitude was no longer a stone cage; it was a Watchman’s Pact. He would remain the spirit of the house but would no longer be a prisoner of the timeline. The bridge was closed, the redcoats banished, and the future was anchored in Rowan’s world.
They packed with frantic, quiet efficiency. The claymore was wrapped in oilcloth alongside the Sasine Deed. They took only what they could carry: a bag of seeds, a Bible, and the heavy wool blankets Isobel had woven.
Their departure from the Highlands was a blur of mist and muffled hooves.
Alistair led their small Garron pony, which was laden with the few chests that held all their worldly possessions. Little Uilleam sat atop the gear, his eyes wide and silent. He sensed the vibration of his father’s hand on the hilt of his claymore. They traveled by night, avoiding the main tracks where Hanoverian patrols were tightening their grip on the rebel glens.
At the port of Campbeltown, they traded their last silver brooches for passage on a cramped merchant vessel. For eight weeks, the Atlantic was their only horizon.
The sea trip was a nightmare of salt spray and cramped quarters below deck. Young Uilleam, only five years old, clung to Alistair’s kilt as the ship pitched in the gray swells. Isobel sang Gaelic lullabies at night to drown out the groaning timber. Her heart ached for the hills she was leaving, but soared for the life they were saving. The air below deck was a thick soup of salt, unwashed wool, and the tang of oatmeal and salt beef. Isobel spent the stormy nights pressed against Alistair’s side, the rhythm of the ship’s groaning timbers matching the thrum of the spell she had cast.
Their destination was the low, sandy coastline of North Carolina. After disembarking at Brunswick Town, they followed the Great Wagon Road and the river, traveling ninety miles inland toward the Highland Scots settlements.
The landscape changed. The jagged gray mountains of home were replaced by towering longleaf pines in the Sandhills. The ground was no longer peat but white, thirsty sand. They settled near Cross Creek, where the Argyll Colony had already begun to transform the wilderness into a new Gaelic Kingdom. Here, the air was hot and thick with the scent of pine instead of peat, but they heard the familiar, musical lilt of Gaelic voices.
Together with fellow Scots, they built a cabin in the Sand Hills region. Alistair’s strength, which had once been used for war, was now used to clear towering pines to make way for corn and wheat. They built a community where the Presbyterian faith and clan structures thrived under the Carolina sun.
One evening, as the sun dipped below the pines and the cicadas began their rhythmic hum, Alistair stood on the porch of their new home, looking out over the land he had claimed. He felt a hand on his arm.
Isobel stood beside him, her face glowing in the twilight. She took his large, calloused hand and gently guided it to her stomach.
“The bridge is closed, Alistair,” she whispered. Her eyes shone with a peace he had never seen in Scotland before. “But the line continues. There is another one coming,a new light for a new world. I think it’s a daughter. She will carry the name Rowan into the new world.”
Alistair felt the faint, rhythmic pulse beneath his palm. He looked at the horizon, knowing that, somewhere, three hundred years away, Rowan was waking up in a café that would always be home. Although it wasn’t the stone croft of Scotland, as Alistair laid the hearthstone, he felt the connection snap into place. The Guardian was home. Alistair wept then—not for the home he had lost, but for the life he had saved.
16 The Dissolution of the Diamond Hour
The months following the Siege of Steam and Steel were an era of impossible peace. By the year 2026, the coffee shop, once a site of temporal fractures and spectral warfare, had become the heartbeat of the neighborhood. The scent of roasted Ethiopian beans and steamed oat milk masked the lingering smell of ozone and old wool. Alistair, now a man anchored by the present rather than a ghost, moved through the café with a weary grace, his broad shoulders finally relaxing into the rhythm of the modern world.
Vale, the developer, vanished from their lives like smoke in a gale. After witnessing the impossible, men in kilts cleaving through light with steel, he dropped the lawsuit, sold his interests, and retreated into a life of quiet sobriety. The land remained untouchable. For a while, it seemed they had won.
But the ‘unbelonging’ was a cold current beneath the warm surface. Alistair would often stand by the window, staring at the neon streetlights as if they were alien stars. Rowan would catch herself looking into the mirror and seeing not her own face but the ghost of Isobel as if she were a double-exposed photograph.
The night of the Great Unweaving began at 3:14 a.m. The air in their upstairs apartment above the café didn’t just grow cold; it grew thin, as if the oxygen were being filtered through centuries of dust. Rowan sat up in bed, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird.
“Alistair,” she whispered, her voice sounding small as if traveling from a great distance. “Wake up. Something is happening.”
Alistair bolted upright, his hand instinctively reaching for the space where his claymore used to rest. But his hand passed through the nightstand. Not through the air, through the wood. The solid oak was flickering and turning translucent, like a digital image losing its resolution.
“Can you feel it?” Rowan gasped, her fingers clutching his forearm. “The pull. It’s not a haunting, Alistair. It’s the rewriting.”
Alistair looked at his own hands. The scars from the 1745 uprising were glowing with a pale, silver light. “Isobel,” he murmured, a name that felt more real than Rowan’s in that moment. “She did it. She fixed the gap. She chose a different path.”
As they embraced, the world began to dissolve. It wasn’t a sudden explosion but rather a meticulous and agonizing undoing.
The house’s transformation was a reverse symphony of construction.
First, the modern mask of the café began to peel away. The sleek, subway-tiled walls shivered and turned into gray mist. The espresso machine, a triumph of Italian engineering, began to hum a low, mournful note before its chrome body softened into the shape of a blackened iron kettle. Then, it vanished entirely into the ether.
The large plate-glass windows overlooking the street didn’t break; they simply ceased to exist. The neon ‘Open’ sign flickered once and dissolved into a swarm of golden sparks that drifted upward like embers from a peat fire.
Rowan and Alistair lay in the center of the bed, but the bed was no longer there. They were suspended in a void of shifting memories. They watched the drywall evaporate, revealing the original 18th-century timber frames beneath it. But these frames, too, were being reclaimed by time. The wood didn’t rot. It un-aged, turning back into saplings and then into nothingness as the timeline corrected the fact that the house had been abandoned in 1746.
“I’m scared,” Rowan cried. Her form became a shimmering outline of blue static. “Where are we going?”
“We aren’t going anywhere, mo ghraidh,” Alistair said, his voice vibrating in her chest. “We are becoming what we were always meant to be. The story is being set to order.”
As they dissolved, the sounds of 2026—the distant sirens, the hum of the city, and the buzz of the internet—were replaced by a profound silence. The apartment floor vanished. Rowan and Alistair fell softly through the layers of history until they were pressed against the cold, damp earth.
The café was gone. The modern street was gone.
The process slowed as it reached 1746. Because Isobel and Alistair had fled to the North Carolina colonies in the past, the house had never been maintained. No developer ever bought it. It was never a coffee shop.
The ‘Highlander Spirit’ was no longer bound to the stone because the man had lived a full life in the Cape Fear River Valley.
When the shimmering stopped, the sun rose over a vastly different landscape.
Where the bustling café had stood was now only a hollowed-out ruin.
The only thing that remained was the great foundation stone, moss-covered and cracked by two centuries of frost.
Low, jagged stone walls, barely waist-high, traced the skeleton of the croft. Rowan trees and wild heather choked them, their roots prying deep into the mortar.
There was no smell of espresso. Only the scent of wet stone, ancient rain, and the faint, lingering sweetness of a pine forest from a distant land lingered.
The ruin stood as a silent monument. It held hundreds of years of memories, not of a haunting, but of a sacrifice. A woman once stood there to weave a spell that saved her husband, and a man once stood there to guard a future he would never truly see.
The 2026 versions of Rowan and Alistair had disappeared, their bloodline rewritten by the Highland Scots of North Carolina. All that remained was the wind whistling through the stones—a low humming frequency that, if you listened closely, sounded like a bowstring finally released.
17 The Resonance of the Hearth
It was 1980, and the air in Boston was filled with the humid, salty heat of midsummer. Elara MacCullen sat in her high-rise office, the Financial District skyline shimmering like a mirage through the glass. To any observer, she was the epitome of modern success: a sharp, thirty-year-old attorney with a reputation for tenacity and copper-red hair that seemed to catch every stray beam of light. She was engaged to David, a kind and pragmatic architect whose steady, grounding presence balanced her intensity.
Yet, despite her accomplishments, Elara had spent her life feeling like a phantom in her own skin. Since childhood, she had been haunted by a ‘pull’—a low humming in her bones that whispered of peat smoke, jagged peaks, and cold northern rain she had never felt. Her heritage was a map of the Highland Scots of North Carolina; her 7th great-grandparents, Alistair and Isobel, were the first to cross the Atlantic. But to Elara, the story always felt unfinished, like a book with the final chapter torn out.
For her thirtieth birthday, David gave her an envelope containing two tickets to Scotland. “Let’s go find whatever is calling you,” he said with a smile.
They spent two weeks immersed in the mist. They walked the somber, wind-swept moor of Culloden Battlefield, where Elara wept for no apparent reason. They scoured the National Records of Scotland in Edinburgh, tracing a lineage that seemed to vibrate whenever she touched the old parchment.
On their final day, they drove a rented Rover toward Inverness, taking a narrow, forgotten side road that hugged the base of the mountains. The landscape was a patchwork of deep greens and bruised purples, the heather in full, defiant bloom.
Suddenly, Elara gasped, her hand flying to the dashboard. “David, stop! Stop the car!”
David jerked the wheel, the tires crunching on the gravel shoulder. “What is it? Is it a deer? Did I hit something?”
“No,” Elara whispered, her honey-colored eyes wide and fixed on a spot hidden behind a cluster of ancient rowan trees. “Back up. Please. Back up and pull over at that clearing.”
David frowned but complied, shifting into reverse. As the car crept backward, a structure emerged from the shadows of the trees. It wasn’t a house—not anymore. It was a jagged stone skeleton, a low-walled ruin choked with weeds and the weight of two centuries.
Elara didn’t wait for the car to fully stop. She threw open the door and stepped out into the damp Highland air. The moment her boots hit the earth, the hum in her blood intensified into a roar. She didn’t just see the ruins; she remembered them.
“Elara, wait!” David called out, scrambling after her. “Be careful! Those stones look ready to collapse. I don’t want you to get hurt.”
She didn’t hear him. She moved with a strange, predatory grace toward the center of the remains of the building. The modern world—her law firm in Boston, her upcoming wedding, and the ’80s pop music playing on the car radio—dissolved. She was standing where she felt she belonged.
She stepped over a fallen lintel and stood in what must have once been the main room. The floor was now nothing but dirt and moss, but Elara knew exactly where the table had been. She knew where the light would have hit the floor at dawn. She walked toward the back of the structure, where the stones rose highest, forming the remnants of a massive chimney.
“Elara, seriously,” David said, catching up to her. His voice echoed in the hollow space. “It’s just a blackhouse ruin. There are thousands of these all over the Highlands. We’re going to be late for our dinner reservation in Inverness.”
She didn’t answer. Instead, she reached out and tenderly caressed the rough, lichen-covered surface of the central hearthstone with her slender fingers. The stone was cold, yet beneath her touch, it felt alive.
As she cleared away a patch of thick green moss near the base, her heart skipped a beat. There, carved deep into the granite, was a luckenbooth—the traditional Scottish symbol of two hearts entwined under a crown. It was worn by time, but the lines were unmistakable.
“David,” she said, her voice thick with an emotion she couldn’t name. “Look.”
He leaned in, his architect’s eye catching the carving’s symmetry. “That’s…that’s an old marriage mark. Beautiful craftsmanship for such a remote croft.”
Elara turned to him, her bright, amber eyes shimmering with sudden, fierce clarity. “I want this house, David.”
He laughed, a short, confused sound. “You want to visit it? We can take some photos, Elara, but—”
“No,” she interrupted, grabbing his hands. “I want to buy this house. I want to buy this land and rebuild it. I want the stones to stand again. I want the roof to be thatched. I want this to be our home.”
David stared at her, stunned. He looked at the jagged walls, the weeds, and the glen’s utter isolation. “Elara, be reasonable. This is a ruin. It’s hundreds of years old. There’s no plumbing or electricity, and it’s halfway across the world from Boston.”
“It’s not just a ruin,” she whispered, leaning her head against the hearthstone. “It’s the anchor. I’ve been searching for this place my whole life. Can’t you feel it? The air here is different. It’s warm. It’s ours.”
David looked from the Luckenbooth to the woman he loved. He noticed how the copper in her hair matched the lichen on the stones and how she seemed more present in this ruin than she ever had in their luxury apartment. He saw the legacy of Alistair and Isobel—a line that traveled to the New World, only to find its way back to the very spot where it began.
“These old ruins?” he asked softly, a smile tugging at the corners of his mouth for the first time.
“Yes,” she laughed. It was a bright, clear sound that seemed to chase the shadows from the corners of the stone. “These old ruins.”
“Okay,” he said, pulling her into his arms. “Let’s do it. We’ll rebuild them. Every stone.”
Elara fell into his embrace, pressing her face against his shoulder. As she closed her eyes, she didn’t see the ruins. Instead, she saw a future: a cozy space filled with the scent of freshly roasted coffee, a warm hearth, and a man with a warrior’s heart standing guard by the door. The bridge was closed, the cycle was complete, and the Highlands had finally called their daughter home.
18 The Eternal Return
Winter of 2005 arrived in the Highlands with howling winds and a purple-gray sky. In the glen, the old stone house, now a beacon of warmth, not a ruin, stood defiant against the storm. Smoke curled from the chimney, smelling of seasoned birch and the deep, nutty richness of roasted coffee.
Elara stood by the window, her hair, once copper-red, now soft and elegant silver. She looked at the rowan tree in the garden, its berries bright red against the snow, and then at her daughter.
Rowan moved between the tables with an ancient grace. She was the spitting image of the women Elara had read about—with her high cheekbones, eyes like honeyed amber, and quiet strength.
“It’s time, mo ghràidh,” Elara said, stepping forward. She pulled a heavy iron key from her apron and pressed it into Rowan’s palm. “Your father and I rebuilt the walls, but you are the soul of the hearth now. This is your heir. Keep the fire lit.”
Rowan closed her fingers over the cold metal. “I will, Mama. I promise.”
The afternoon faded into a violet twilight. The last of the local hikers had headed home, leaving Rowan alone to wipe down the counters. The hum in the air—the one Elara had felt in 1980—was louder tonight, vibrating in the floorboards like a purring cat.
The heavy oak door groaned open, letting in a swirl of crystalline snow and a blast of frigid air.
A man stepped inside. He was tall with broad shoulders, clad in a modern, salt-stained technical jacket. His knit hat was encrusted with ice, and his boots left dark, wet prints on the flagstone floor.
“I…I am so sorry,” he said in a deep, weary rasp. He pulled off his hat, revealing dark hair damp with melted snow and a face lined with exhaustion deeper than that from a long hike. “I didn’t realize how quickly it would get dark. I’m afraid I’ve made a bit of a mess of your floor.”
He offered a crooked grin that felt like a lightning strike to Rowan’s chest. Her heart didn’t just beat—it hammered with a frantic rhythm of recognition that defied logic.
“The floor can be mopped,” Rowan said, her voice steadier than she felt. “You look like you’ve walked halfway across Scotland.”
“Feels like it,” he admitted, leaning heavily against the counter. “I’m a trauma surgeon in London. I came up here to find some peace. To get away from the sirens and white walls for a week. I think the Highlands decided to test my resolve.”
“Can I get you something?” Rowan asked, her hands moving instinctively to the espresso machine. “A coffee? Something to warm your bones?”
“Black as midnight, please,” he said. He looked around the room, his eyes lingering on the Luckenbooth carved into the hearthstone. A strange shadow passed over his face, not of confusion but of a man finding a missing piece of a puzzle. “And… I hate to be a burden, but is there a room available? Or even a corner by the fire? The roads are disappearing in the snow, and I don’t think I can make it to the village tonight.”
Rowan didn’t even consult the ledger. She knew there was space. She knew there had always been a place for him. “We have a room upstairs. It’s warm, and the bed is sturdy.”
She handed him a steaming ceramic mug. As he reached for it, his fingers brushed hers. The spark was literal—a snap of blue static that made them both jump.
The man laughed softly, a rich sound that filled the café. He set the mug down and held out a large, calloused hand—the hand of a healer with the strength of a warrior.
“I’m Alistair,” he said with a gorgeous, soul-deep smile.
Rowan took his hand, her skin humming where it touched his. The name felt like a song she had known before she was born.
“Rowan,” she replied, her eyes locked on his. “My name is Rowan.”
Outside, the snow continued to fall, burying the ruins of the past and the roads of the future. But inside, by the ancient hearth, the bridge had finally been crossed—permanently and beautifully.
















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